When you are adding this you may want to change the frame size, so it fits on the screen without scrolling (kind of difficult to read).
You started the essay perfectly, dissecting what experiences led your to your current perspective. It seemed to lack focus at the end in terms of tying it back to perspectives or specific events. I liked how personal and reflective it was.
When you are adding this you may want to change the frame size, so it fits on the screen without scrolling (kind of difficult to read).
ReplyDeleteYou started the essay perfectly, dissecting what experiences led your to your current perspective. It seemed to lack focus at the end in terms of tying it back to perspectives or specific events. I liked how personal and reflective it was.
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